Tuesday, March 19, 2013

Exercise 6: Video Pitch

Sunday Afternoon on the Island of La Grande Jatte 
Painted by Georges Seurat 



Logline: This shows a typical spring afternoon on the quad; people studying, having fun, and hanging out.  


Treatment: It's a sunny spring afternoon on campus, with people hanging out on the quad.  All around the quad, people are busy.  They are rushing to get places, to class, to catch the metro, or to go home.  On the quad, people are busy, but not in a rushed way.  They are busy hanging out, studying, having fun, and relaxing.  There is a group of people talking and laughing about a story that one of them just told.  To their left, there are people playing frisbee.  Not far from the frisbee players is a lone girl sitting near a tree reading. She is having difficulty relaxing, because she is near the commotion of the busy class-goers and can see everyone else having fun with their friends.  Near her is another group of people, this time, sitting in a rough circle on their computers and phones, ignoring those around them.  During all of this, people are still shuffling along the sidewalks both in the quad and around it and more people are coming to sit on the quad, creating even more of a distraction for the girl.  This scene comes to a close by displaying all the activities that are occurring on the quad in one shot which shows the girl giving up and leaving the relaxing area that is the quad and giving into the busy commotion of those surrounding her.  

Tuesday, March 5, 2013

Exercise 4: Photo Essay

How-To Photo Essay:  How to go on a First Date





Step One: Meet at Front Door






Step Two: Walk to Dinner





Step Three: Order Dinner





Step Four: Make Eye Contact







Step Five: Flirt





Step Six: Fight Over the Check





Step Seven: Walk Home




Step Eight: Kiss Goodnight






Our photo essay is called “How to go on a First Date.”  It is not supposed to be a serious photo essay, rather it is meant to be a comedy.  Through the pictures, we wanted to show awkwardness, which is represented in the first half of the pictures.  In some cases, the awkwardness feels tangible, like in step four: make eye contact. 

We decided to do two different pictures for step one and step four because it shows two different perspectives, allowing for a bit more interpretation than just showing one.  When we took the pictures for step four, we did not follow the rule of thirds, because we felt it made the uncomfortable feeling less pronounced.  The picture for step three: order dinner, continuance is used a bit because our eyes want to follow his hand down to the main subject matter of the photo, the couple on a date. 

Overall, I’m happy with how our photo essay came out, the pictures convey the humor and the awkwardness that we wanted, because those are the feelings that can be very prominent when going on a first date.